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Cinderella -Part 11- Yaoi by Yaoi-chick-21, literature

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I cant figure out why I have writers block!!! AHH! I hate it...hopefully I will get some out soon!!
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Wow in a weeks time I have had two interviews for jobs....now I have one!!! I work at a law firm as a reseptionist. Damn....I have three days of trail then I work....Happy but also nervous! Ok I went to the Library tonigh and got some CDs...one was the preformace 'Carman'...I was listening to the overture and a story poped into my head... Small outlook so far: Alysa and Allyson- (age:17) Twins girls, both great point dancers, lost their parents to drunk driver, now live in big city with no placeto live, during a practice Allyson is kill in a freak accident. Alysa is so distraught she stays with the corpse for three days before someone call
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I have been on a role with writing the new story Cinderella....but now I cant figure out how I am to at least get to some of the smex...AHHH!!!*pulling out hair* I have a few things that have to happen with Cinder when he and Alex form a bond, then it grows into something more...intense...Well back to the writing board. Hope to have a chapter soon...may not be today, but it will come.!!!
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Hey, I saw that you linked up you Cinderella chapters. :)

And that you cleaned up the folders.

Good work.

Are you reading over the chapters yet?
'Are you reading over the chapters yet?' What do you mean?
I am rereading them... to see if I can find errors (spelling..etc.) If you find some could use help...not so good with punctuation
I just read were he got arrested and was talking with the lady cop.

Your flow needs work in how he talks to people in that one.

And you were switching back and forth between first and third pov at the drop of a hat.

You have to settle on one pov per chapter.
I dont really mean to...*pout*I just had some trouble with grammer
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thanks so much for the watch!!! i luv ur cinderella yaoi story :)
Thanks still working on it...
PS...

I like watches and faves, but I like comments even more. :)